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Manuscript Preparation Basics*


* Based on a manuscrpt preparation primer prepared by Anker Publishing Company.

I. TEXT FORMATTING AND DOCUMENTATION

Headings and Subheadings
In your  manuscript, you will probably have at least two types of headings: heads (referred to as level 1 heads) and subheads (referred to as level 2 heads). You may also use sub-subheads: These are level 3 heads. There are two important issues to keep in mind regarding the display of heads.

First, the use of heads conveys the hierarchy and relationship between/among ideas. A level 1 head is a major subject and should be the first head in any new chapter. Your discussion of that major subject will likely require presentation of subordinate ideas—smaller parts of the larger subject. Your discussion of these subordinate ideas should be headed with a level 2 head. If that discussion requires breakdown of the smaller parts, use a level 3 head.
    
Examples of heads:
ADVISING STUDENTS                        (1 head) – Bold, small caps
Helping Students to Plan Courses      (2 head) – Bold, upper/lowercase
Freshman Students                                  (3 head) – Italics, upper/lowercase

Second, heads should be consistent throughout all chapters, both in level of importance and in manner of display (typeface and size). This is very important since a reader may not be a content expert in your field and may not always recognize one idea as subordinate to another unless the display indicates such a relationship.
    
Lists
Lists of information should also be displayed consistently throughout the paper. If you use numbering for one list, number all lists; if you use bullets instead of numbers, use bullets throughout the book. Also, if you indent lists, use the same indention. 
    
Tables and Figures
Tables and figures should be numbered according to chapter and sequence within the chapter (e.g., in Chapter 5:  Figure 5.1, Figure 5.2, etc.). Please be sure that the paper include each figure and/or table used.


Recurring Features

Examples of recurring features are chapter summaries, introductions, opening vignettes, and the like. These, too, should be consistently displayed. They should also be similar in length and scope.

Bibliography/References
Though you may cite classic works or studies, you should also use current references, provided, of course, that recent works are available. The most up-to-date information and research is obviously most valuable for your readers.

When preparing book references, please make sure that you include data for the most recent edition. It is also essential that you carefully proofread the names of the authors in your bibliography as the rerader may not be familiar with those names and is therefore unlikely to catch a misspelling.

The following are examples of APA style followed by an explanation of some of the formatting.

Book
Fleishman, E. A., & Hunt, J. G. (1973). Current developments in the study of leadership. Carbondale, IL: Southern Illinois Press.

Journal Article
Schein, E. H. (1990, May/June). Organization culture. American Psychologist, 45(2), 109–119.
   
Edited Book
Bennis, W., Spreitzer, G. M., & Cummings, T. G. (Eds.). (2001). The future of leadership: Today’s top leadership thinkers speak to tomorrow’s leaders. San Francisco, CA: Jossey-Bass.

Chapter or Article in Edited Book
Davenport, T. H. (2001). Knowledge work and the future of management. In W. Bennis, G. M. Spreitzer, & T. G. Cummings (Eds.), The future of leadership: Today’s top leadership thinkers speak to tomorrow’s leaders (pp. 41–58). San Francisco, CA: Jossey-Bass.

Conference Presentation
Barefoot, B. O., Gardner, J. N., Swing, R. L., & Terenzini, P. (2005, April). Effective processes and lessons learned from Foundations of Excellence™ in the first college year: How can we use this for improvement and self-study? Paper presented at the 110th annual meeting of the Higher Learning Commission, Chicago, IL.

Online Document

Author, A. A. (2000). Title of work. Retrieved month, day, year, from source

Online Periodical

Author A. A., Author, B. B., & Author, C. C. (2000). Title of article. Title of Periodical, volume(issue). Retrieved month, day, year, from source

In-Text Reference
(Clay, 1990)
Simple author/date reference; complete reference at end-of-paper.


II.     STYLE/MECHANICS

APA style format should be used in your paper. When you have specific questions during the writing or proofreading of the manuscript, refer to the most recent APA Style Manual or the online resources listed on thie course website.. The following is a list of 13 common style concerns and one publisher's treatment of them.
    
Capitalization
Avoid unnecessary capitalization. For example, “provost” should not be capitalized unless used as a proper noun (e.g., Provost Smith). Follow the same rule for department names (e.g., do not capitalize: mathematics department; capitalize: Department of Mathematics). The biggest concern here is, again, consistency of usage. Make sure that a word or phrase that is capitalized in one place appears the same way in another.  
    
Dashes
Three types of dashes are used in a manuscript: dash, en dash, em dash.
Ellipses
Use ellipses (three periods with spaces between them) to indicate words that you have omitted from a direct quotation (e.g., “Institutions of higher education . . . are in a period of change.”). To show that you’ve omitted an entire sentence or more, use a period at the end of the sentence followed by the three ellipsis dots (e.g., “Times are tough. . . . Everyone must change with the times.”).

Extracts
When you are using a direct quotation of more than 40 words, set it off by indenting it from the left margin by one tab space more than the rest of the text.

Gender/Stereotyping
Do not always use “he” to refer to a whole group of people. Either vary use of “he” and “she,” use “he or she,” or construct the sentence to avoid a gender reference (e.g., “After each student received his paper” could be “After the students received their papers”). Along with sensitivity to language that is gender-related, also avoid stereotyping based on ethnic background, religious or sexual preference, geographic location, or any other individual or group situation.

Hyphens
Hyphenate two words only when they come before the word they modify (well-prepared presentation; the presentation was well prepared).

Indention
When you indent (either to start a paragraph, for a list, or for any other reason), please do not use the space bar. Instead, use the tab key.

Jargon
Avoid unnecessary educational or disciplinary jargon. Since most readers of your paper will be educators, you can use terms that are widely recognized. However, jargon comes and goes, and overuse of it will date your paper.

Passive Voice
Do not overuse the passive voice (e.g., “The meeting was planned by the participating members.”). The active voice is usually more precise and less wordy (e.g., “The members planned the meeting.”)        

Punctuation
Leave only one space between a period or a colon and the beginning of the next sentence or the next letter or numeral.
    
Time References
The writing of a paper may span many months. It is important when you reread the paper before submitting it to the instructor that you watch for consistent time references. For example, if you referred to something that “will occur early in 2007,” and it’s now past that date, change the tense. When referring to future or past events, avoid terms such as “within the next couple of semesters” or “four months ago” or even “recently.” Instead, use dates when possible: “by the end of the 1996 winter semester” or “in January 1994.”

Wordiness
Avoid unnecessary phrases and words (e.g., “At this point in time,” “The consensus among the group is,” “It is in fact the case that”). If you can cut out words and phrases, do so; it almost always results in clearer writing.

Word List
Many words have more than one acceptable spelling or punctuation. Here are some suggestions regarding frequently misspelled words or terms. 

% (not percent) 19th century
(not Nineteenth Century)
1960s (not 1960’s) a.m./p.m. acknowledgment
advisor chat room coauthor cocurricular cocurricular
college-wide coursework coworker database decision-making
downside email evenhanded firsthand fundraising
grassroots home page hyperlink lifelong lifelong
midterm multiyear nationwide nontraditional online
onsite policymakers problem solving service-learning shortsighted
statewide time-consuming timeframe timeline voicemail
web site workday workload workweek yearlong


III. ELECTRONIC GUIDELINES

Before you prepare your final document, please read these guidelines carefully. Following them will allow others to work efficiently with paper in its electronic format.

Bulleted or Numbered Lists
Type the bullet or number, then use the TAB key. Do not use the space bar. (If your document is formatted in HTML, use the bulleted-list command or INDENT command instead of the TAB key.)

Columns
Never use the space bar to align columns. Always use the tab key. Undoing use of the space bar is extraordinarily time-consuming and the most frequent error in electronic manuscript preparation.
(If your document is formatted in HTML, use the table function instead of the TAB key to format columns.)

End of Paragraphs  
Use a hard return at the end of paragraphs but not at the end of individual text lines.

End-of-Sentence Punctuation  
Leave only one space between sentences.

Endnotes and Footnotes
In APA style, when notation is used at all, we use endnotes rather than footnotes, so please do not use the footnote format in yur paper. In general, you should
incorporate information into the text and use a citation that will appear at the end of the chapter in the chapter references. If you absolutely must use an endnote, insert a superscript number and put the note at the end of the chapter. Please use such notes very sparingly; again, when possible, incorporate information into the text and use a citation that will appear at the end of the chapter in the chapter references.

Extracts
Extracts (direct quotations longer than 40 words) should be indented from the left margin, again by setting the margins, not by using the TAB key.

Hanging Indentions
If you want all lines after the first one to be indented, set that via margins on your computer. Please do not use tabs to indicate each line of a hanging indention. If you cannot set up the indent on your computer, please make a note on the electronic manuscript indicating where a hanging indention should begin [BEGIN HANGING INDENT] and where it should end [END HANGING INDENT].

Lists
Type lists as one long column or place multiple column lists in a table.

Numbers
Use the 0 (zero) and 1 (one) number keys rather than the letters o and l. Numbers one through nine should be spelled out. Numbers 10 and up should use the numeral.

Side-by-Side Paragraphs
Paragraphs that appear side-by-side in the paper should be separated by use of a two-column table, not the space bar.

Tables
If your table or chart entries are only one or two lines long, you can use the TAB key to move from one column to the next. For tables or charts with long paragraph entries, please do the following:




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